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To have found a heart to cleave to
A soul to delve within
Warm flesh to lie beside at night
To stare into another’s eyes
And see yourself therein

To have found heaven in a simple touch
And hell within goodbye
To hear your name upon their lips
Be greeted with a single kiss
And feel your soul take flight

To have fasted your fate unto another’s
To have two lives merge into one
What other blessings could I offer thee
Greater than what you share between
Greater than the beauty of your love
©2008-2009 ~El-Sharra-ELSWheRe
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i had a couple of friends ask me to write something for thier wedding, ths is my first attempt.

constructive critisism is very welcome!
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That is so pretty. I love it!^_^

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"I can do random shit and old people would say 'young people' not 'how appalling!' Which is probably synonymous in old people speak"

"Shut up, asswipe"
"Asswipe? Who ran around saying they were God as opposed to Justice? You're wipin' my ass, Justice!"
Thank you so much, and for the fav too!

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No problem.

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"I can do random shit and old people would say 'young people' not 'how appalling!' Which is probably synonymous in old people speak"

"Shut up, asswipe"
"Asswipe? Who ran around saying they were God as opposed to Justice? You're wipin' my ass, Justice!"

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